You could have added how the queen had arrested him and locked him in a cell where he met Edmund. Good Job!
Mr. Tumnas was a very nice and good character. In the end battle scene he helps out with Aslan and the Pevansie children to defeat the White Witch.
It's a very good fakebook. But you could have told how it's feeling when your frozen.
You could have added how the queen had arrested him and locked him in a cell where he met Edmund. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteMr. Tumnas was a very nice and good character. In the end battle scene he helps out with Aslan and the Pevansie children to defeat the White Witch.
ReplyDeleteIt's a very good fakebook. But you could have told how it's feeling when your frozen.
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